Wednesday, June 5, 2013

Writing an argument


Writing an argument:Lollies are bad.

Statement: “Children should eat lollies”

Do you agree or disagree?

Use the table to help you with your decision:



Children should eat lollies because...
Children should not eat lollies because...
1
Its so tasty.

Its bad for your teeth.
2
It give you energy.

You can get diabetes.
3
It has a sweet taste that the kids like.

Theres heaps of sugar.
4


Your teeth could get black and rotten.
5


Lollies can cause you to be obese.
children should not eat lollies because it is bad for your teeth. It can give you stomach aches when eating too much. You could get diabetes from the amount of sugar in the lollies.

When eating lollies your teeth could get black and rotten. Too much lollies can cause an unhealthy life ahead. To prevent having a bad life stop with eating lollies now before its too late.

Lollies can cause you to be obese and you would not like a life like that. Do not eat too much lollies everyday don't eat twenty in one whole day have two or five the maximum. Or you could get a really sore stomach from too much sugar in your blood.

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